Thursday, February 16, 2012

letter

Dear Pamela
This  letter is you to chat since it me was in my vacations. During my vacations I put to work but well if you knew everything what happened to me in this work. During my stay in my work they put me to do so many ridiculous things one of them was that in they me set to dance in the street to announce a few medicinal products after all that they disguised me of clown to initiate a few toys after ,they set me to wash cars to attract to the people.I was the whole labor experience but even like that I learned much

1 comment:

Mr. Ruben said...

Mmmh... didn't really liked it. If you pay attention, most of it is written in Spanish, just using English words. You MUST stop thinking in Spanish when you write. Otherwise, it just won't make sense.

Remember to take this into account, because it won't look good in an exam.