Monday, February 6, 2012

homework

hello I m going to talk about a story when I was child. Well when I was a child my mother bougth a cat to me but to my sister bought a little duck I wasn t agree because I didn't liked birds or animals with feathers.
Well one night when I was to sleep I heard a very strong noisy I heard like a dog barking. I woke up and I go to the window but only I saw a shadow I was very afraid that I go to my bed and covered my head.

Next day mornig I woke up late and when to look for my mother but I looked for my sister only and she said me sorry but whe I woke up your cat was dead and my duck too.
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Nobody didn t heard any noisy. But there was a lot blood front the door.
My sister said that my cat kill her duck but I know that it was that shadow.

Since that day I hear a strange noisy every night and I dream my cat.

1 comment:

Mr. Ruben said...

And then? What really happened? I think we needed more details.

Also, don't think in Spanish when you're writing, because it makes some sentences sound weird in English. But it was ok.

And was it really true?